Monday 2 February 2009

Hidden Feelings

When you said goodbye
you saw the smile on rosy lips
on an angel face that she kept high.

Her golden locks on shoulders laid.
With silken bow on a slender waist,
her tender ring-less fingers played.

Sea blue eyes, such pleasing face.
With heaving chest and flowing gown,
she stood there with goddess grace.

But when you said goodbye...

you missed to see
what the birds saw
and so did the passing bee.

The sun saw it from behind the cloud.
A pearly tear in the sea eyes
screaming with a broken heart,
wouldn't let it out.

Oh! so proud...

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Oh man!!! this is seriously above my thought limits.. :D

still i guess there is a serious meaning behind the Goodbye.. ;)

Anonymous said...

Really deep...

Like someone said - "“Remember me and smile, for it's better to forget than remember me and cry."